Feeling uneasy - uncertain of where we stand
Hitting this wall I blank out in stillness
No place to go - I'm pinned down
Im a slave to these thoughts
My thoughts are a slave to you
I'll stay unable to move until I know
dont hold me in vain - my heart cant deal
I'll be safe knowing where we stand
I'll stop moving if I know where we're going
Move at your speed- I'll go as fast as you want
Come to a stop - I'll go as slow as you need.
Again, Im not always crazy about the things I write.. This is from a while ago as well.. I never really try to edit my stuff and I know I should. Its just emotions and I spit it out how I feel.
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I'm with you on the editing side...I really hate revising. Nice poem here though. Cool thoughts.
ReplyDeleteEmotions have come out well in this one. I reckon, the editing needs to be done only to fir the melody mould. Else, it is just fine!!!
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